Monday, 24 August 2015

Writing Competition: Holly

How to Draw a Secret Shape

If you follow these instructions carefully you will draw the secret shape. 

You will need:
papper 
pen 
rubber 

Steps:
1. Draw a horiontal rectangle about 20cm long in the middle of the page.
2. Draw the diagonal line across the page.
3. Draw a circle on the botton half of the rectangle.
4. Draw 2 circles out  the side but half a circle.
5. Draw a triangle at the top with a circle in it and at the bottom draw  a triangle and in the rectangle.

If you have followed these instructions you will have the secret shape.
By Holly - Waka Stride 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Holly,
    well done for using 'Bossy Verbs' like stand, draw and colour to to start each step. To make it better - fix the word paper.
    Next time you could draw some diagrams.

    From Stride Team

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  2. Great work Holly at using lots of the success criteria for instructions like numbered steps on a new line that begin with an imperative verb.

    Team Judge

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