tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2862524352162688153.post5109970298336131605..comments2015-09-07T10:26:28.310+12:00Comments on Stride Team: Writing Competition: HollyAllana Thttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2862524352162688153.post-76662682429727600002015-08-30T09:23:43.552+12:002015-08-30T09:23:43.552+12:00AWARD:
Award for effort!AWARD:<br />Award for effort!Allana Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2862524352162688153.post-6593584695392466782015-08-29T19:33:34.096+12:002015-08-29T19:33:34.096+12:00Great work Holly at using lots of the success crit...Great work Holly at using lots of the success criteria for instructions like numbered steps on a new line that begin with an imperative verb.<br /><br />Team JudgeAllana Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2862524352162688153.post-81661546681861201772015-08-26T11:18:22.354+12:002015-08-26T11:18:22.354+12:00Hi Holly,
well done for using 'Bossy Verbs'...Hi Holly,<br />well done for using 'Bossy Verbs' like stand, draw and colour to to start each step. To make it better - fix the word paper.<br />Next time you could draw some diagrams. <br /><br />From Stride Team<br />Allana Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.com