Thursday, 27 August 2015

The Rocket

I have a rocket
His name is Davy Crockett
He goes really fast 
He never comes last.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Jack,
    I really like the way you have written such a great rocket poem. You have made the right lines rhyme.
    To make it better you could say what you rocket never comes last in.
    From Molly


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