tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2862524352162688153.post7267493643702663270..comments2015-09-07T10:26:28.310+12:00Comments on Stride Team: The RocketAllana Thttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2862524352162688153.post-54164698418539404232015-09-02T11:54:32.037+12:002015-09-02T11:54:32.037+12:00Dear Jack,
I really like the way you have written ...Dear Jack,<br />I really like the way you have written such a great rocket poem. You have made the right lines rhyme.<br />To make it better you could say what you rocket never comes last in.<br />From MollyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com