Friday, 25 September 2015

Writing compition Charlotte

On a sunny bright clear day there was a man going to jump of a cliff .Ah I'm so SCEARED I don t no why I even did this my heart is pounding so fast. I could feel my hands my pans were pushing the air. The jandles sitting abounded on the sandy beach side. When I looked at the rocks on the right hand side they looked as they were coming to me.cliifs are crumbling like there's been a earthquake . His cloths are jiggling like he has rinckils in his T wondering what he was thinking when he jumped of the cliff.

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