Writing compition Charlotte

On a sunny bright clear day there was a man going to jump of a cliff .Ah I'm so SCEARED I don t no why I even did this my heart is pounding so fast. I could feel my hands my pans were pushing the air. The jandles sitting abounded on the sandy beach side. When I looked at the rocks on the right hand side they looked as they were coming to me.cliifs are crumbling like there's been a earthquake . His cloths are jiggling like he has rinckils in his T shirt.im wondering what he was thinking when he jumped of the cliff.

Moment in time: Dogs playing.

I can hear my owner calling to me, telling me to come back, but I ignored her. I am a black and white dog, I have a white face with a black patch, plus a black back as black as coal, as well as a white tummy and chest. My drenched fur is like smooth silk My tail is black with a white tip. My eyes are light blue like the  colour of the sea rippling.

The smell of the salty sea entered my nose and a few splashes of water go down my throat that tasted salty. The water gliding through my hind legs and fur feels like a hundred ghosts flying through the trees of a haunted forest. The brownish dog licked my face. Suddenly I stare off into the distance, out there is something. Thoughts raced through my head like a horse in a horse race, what is out there? Was it dangerous? If so would it kill me?

Moment in Time - Under Water by Holly

The water is bright blue shimmery and shiny. Most of the fish are as colourful like a butterfly. It makes me wonder is there a shark is hiding amongst the sea weed. The fish it feels like a scaley monster. The fish has a scaley back. And is splashing and flapping up and down. The shells are the colour of lapis under the water it is beautiful.

From Holly  

Buddy Writing - Bird and Cat Buddies

Buddy Writing - Bird and Cat Buddies

What am I?
I have black scaly wings with tips flapping in the wind. I have a little patch of grass green shaped like a jellybean in the middle of my back. I have a short lemon beak.

My best friend is a ginger cat almost the same size as me. We have been friends since I was born. My best friend looks like a ball of fluff.

I soar through the sky like an airplane. I can complete 5 loop-de-loop in a row. 

Written by Holly and Tegan, with the help of their buddy Zoe

dogs at the beach

I am lying on the beach when I heard some barks. Bark! Bark! Bark! I sit up. I see two dogs playing in the shallow water. The water splashes like a sprinkler all over the dogs. They are playing joyfully under the lite blue sky. Oh no I see a stick flying through the air. The big black and white dog is running after the stick. But. The little black and brown dog is running the other way. Crash! They crash together. Splosh! They have fallen over now.

Moment in time by William

On a bright summers morning i'm in mid air underneath the water. I have just jumped off a huge rock this is my first time because I have never been brave enough to jump off a huge rock but today I thought I could do it. My t-shirt is waving in the air like someone has just pumped my up with air. I am even more frightened because the rock under neath me looks like a very sharp rock and the water looks like it is smashing against the rocks like glass. I am wondering will the water smash like glass at me. OK to be honest I am not so glad that I have done it now. My heart is pounding like a drum and the water looks very salty

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by William

Trees-Darcie

Trees are nice
nice with mice.
Trees have bees
 and happy flees.
Trees are fun
fun to run.

What am I?- Darcie

I am wild
I have stripes
I eat and kill prey.

Moment in time: dogs on the beach by Sjaak

The dog is jumping. The water is raging like white fire. Paws are flying.

One dog has glassy blue eyes that are staring at his ball lying on the beach. But wait, another dog is about to nip the other one's leg! Every thing that is one metre or more away from the fighting dogs is dead calm but the droplets of water around the splashing dogs are literally flying!

They are splashing water on to each other. In the background the fary has just left port. The dogs names are Snouser Wouser and Perilous Patch.

Snouser Wouser is about to bite Perilous Patch! Perilous patch will get the ball. His owner is calling him. The people at the show behind them are watching the fighting dogs.

 But, in the end they will have to go home. Hang on a second, They are still here! They are still splashing for the ball. There tails are waging around like flags in a very strong wind.

Judo and then we fight

All in white,
we are a group that plays turtle soup,

then we fight.

All in white, 

two yellow tabs we don't act like crabs,

then we fight.

All in white,

we don't make a sound on the ground 

then we fight

All in white,

we help each other one another,

then we fight.

All in white,

lots of competitions and decisions,

then we fight.

All in white,

I love Judo that is very true,

then we fight!

Moment in Time: Dog in water by Kelsey

"I am at the beach having great fun. Bark! Bark! Bark! I am Bark the dog and I am just about to pounce on my brothers skinny body. This may hurt because he is very bony he is as hard as a base ball bat. As the water splashed and crinkled, I wobbled.
"WAIT! WAIT! WAIT! WAIT! WAIT!"

"Yapped my bony brother. Drips scatter like a sprinkler The fresh,salty,smelly air floods my nose holes as I prepare for my falling. Then suddenly my eyes swap direction like a fly swatter I see a stinky boot bobbing in the water. Shall I go and get it? Or stay here and keep on falling on my bony, skinny, little, stinky brother? Also still falling don't want to help! As I say that the clouds drift really slowly like a snail. My brother yapping wait still!

what am I? - Darcie

You can type on me
I have a pad that you can use to click on stuff
I use internet connection.

Moment in Time: Take a dive by Ursula

On a sandy summers day when the waves are ripples and the water is flowing emerald. The rocks are dry and crispy everything is perfect.

Then a man jumps off a cliff, why did he jump off a cliff ?
His arms spread like a bird ready for take off and his hair flapping like a flag.
I see he left his jandals behind on the very quick journey flying.
I hope he makes the jump!

Dogs at the beach - Poppy

On this sweet summer day I was tanning and to my surprise I could see a border collie and a schnauzer playing in the turquoise  blue sea. Both the dogs had the smell of salty water stench in bedded  in there hay like  fur. The wispy clouds float and dissolve in the milky blue sky. Also to my surprise the schnauzer was looking some were else. They started leaping on the top of each other as that started to happen little squirrel yelps started floating out of there mouths. The  dogs were mysteriously both kind of creeping up on each other but still looking away At some other random ball or bone. I started sprinting down the wharf  trying to catch a better glimpse at the dogs mysterious collision . The dogs have some kind of connection I have never seen before.  There body's jumping up and out of the jelly like sea. There paws sinking into the golden sand. The playing or collision started dieing down and I walked all the way home.   

Waste bust Care code

Our Inquiry Team of Waste Busters have asked you what we need to do to look after our school. These are the rules we are going to live by. At Springston Enviro School we...
In Springston Enviro School,

We think that it's really cool,
To get rid of excess waste,
To make our school an awesome place.

Help the Earth...

SO Shut it!
Switch it off!
Pick it up!
Return it!
Recycle it,
Reuse it!

R.E.S.P.E.C.T
Respect it!
Go on!

We are making the music and a movie to go with this song so we can share it with the whole school. 
We hope you will get singing it and start living it too!

By holly and Ursula 

Take a dive

On a summer day I went to the cliff beside the blue sea. And I saw a man that jumped of the cliff and his clothes where softly gliding in the wind. And the water was calmly waiting for him and his sandles where sadly stranded on the crumbled rogh rocks. All so his dredlocks where flapping in the air like rubbish getting blown away.

Cat and budgie ~Lexie and Charlotte

On a horrible wet  rainy day,a cat  and a budgie were looking at that
old brown scruffy dog out the window.


They said to them selves were going
to get that old scruffy brown dog  and eat him.
That dog is always trying to get us so we should get him.



The next day the budgie  saw  the dog hanging around.
The budgie said skawk skawk  come here.
The dog started to be nice to them so the cat and the budgie started to be
nice to the dog too.

A Moment in Time: The Dive by Lexie

I the one lonely jandal stare out at the shimmering blue ocean as I saw my owner
jumping off a cliff.

Jakes hair is sticking up like a porcupines back. His arms are like bird wings.

Jakes back is bended back like a wobbly bridge about to fall. He is flying with his arms outstretched.

Moment in Time: Take A Dive by Todd

On a sunny summers day.
My hands were grasping onto an imaginary boogi board as I jumped off the cliff. I could hear my shorts flapping in the wind and I could see the water rippling in front of me. What was I doing? Was I going to die? Oh no! I thought as I watched my best pair of jandals sit on the cliff. I wanted to get them back, but I couldn't.

Will he ever see his jandals again?

Todd 
Waka Stride

The dive - Molly N - writing competition 2

One sunny day I was falling out of the air about to fall in the peridot  green water, with my rippling 
t-shirt and smooth blue paints. The rocks surrounding me were sticking up like the head of a wail. 


I was so terrified that my hair was sticking up like a hedgehog. Just touching my arms that are grasping the blue air. I was curved like a floating fruit bowl. 
Will I brake my spine or will I be fine. 


What will happen next? 


By Molly. 

Writing competition: Bird and Cat - Toby

I am a ginger cat and my story began when I heard the front door shut. I knew my owners were home. I ran over to them but when I saw what they were holding I was shocked. It was a bird. A stupid, annoying bird. I hate birds very much. I will never change my mind about them.

Once my owners put the cage down on the table they walk out of the room. I climbed onto the table and walked up to it. "Hello." It said. I was shocked. How dare it think about talking to me, I am the boss and I will always be. "I don't know who you are but I am the boss around here so what I say, you do." I snarl.
Suddenly a big flame of fire bursted out of the kitchen. Before I knew it the whole house was on fire. I didn't know what to do. I looked back at where the bird was, but it was gone.
I jumped down of the table and tried to rush out of the front door but a large block of wood fell of the ceiling onto my furry tail. I could not escape. I was stuck. I thought I was going to die when all of a sudden the bird swooped in and lifted the piece of wood of my tail. It saved me. I could not believe it!

We both rushed out of the house and was safe and sound. "Why did you save me?" I asked  in confusion. "I wanted to be your friend." It replied.

From then on we become best friends. We still talk about what happened that day and it still amazes how I could ever become best friends with a bird.















By Toby, Ben and Zeke

Springston School Care Code

Our Inquiry Team of Waste Busters have asked you what we need to do to look after our school. These are the rules we are going to live by. At Springston Enviro School we...


In Springston Enviro School,
We think that it's really cool,
To get rid of excess waste,
To make our school an awesome place.

SO Shut it!
Switch it of!
Pick it up!

Return it!
Recycle it,
Reuse it!

R.E.S.P.E.C.T
Respect it!

We are making the music and a movie to go with this song so we can share it with the whole school. We hope you will get singing it and start living it too!

Winners of writing competition

Well done to all of the team who have entered their writing in the competition. Your work is great. What is even better is all the editing you did to get it ready to publish. 

This photo shows the winners from Waka Stride and Whio. Make sure you enter Competition 2 due in two weeks time!

Thomas's Writing