Friday 24 July 2015

Writing Competition: Holly


1 comment:

  1. Great work Holly on using the same sound twice in your poem with 'bare and breezy'.

    Challenge:
    Don't use too many adjectives in a row. Just have 2 at the most: 'the sad cold tree'.

    Team Judge

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