tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2862524352162688153.post3894353775396933407..comments2015-09-07T10:26:28.310+12:00Comments on Stride Team: Dragon Buddy Writing - Todd & JedAllana Thttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2862524352162688153.post-66683504638296716782015-08-30T09:06:59.264+12:002015-08-30T09:06:59.264+12:00Wow there is heaps of writing here. Great work on ...Wow there is heaps of writing here. Great work on using speech marks in your writing. You also choose dome interesting vocabulary like: electronically, genetic, possibility and victim.<br /><br />Challenge:<br />Use paragraphs so my eye can move around your writing easily. You could also put every new speaker on a new line with the speech.<br /><br />Team JudgeAllana Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13794373268721064965noreply@blogger.com