Tuesday 25 August 2015

Dragon Buddy Writing - Daniel





Attention listeners! Sorry to interrupt the video games but a group of dragons have invaded Earth, taking away all its gravity. You will soon be floating into space. 

Be aware that the dragons burn down houses and eat burglars or robbers. Thankfully these creatures can be trained to carry from place to place but not to eat your family."

The line went flat and the lights went out as the reporter transformed in to one of those dragons. 

What will the reporter do next?

By Daniel - Waka Stride

1 comment:

  1. Well done for using short sentences for effect Daniel as well as some clauses with their comma. A question is a great way to end.

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